Ahh grandmahs
Its was like having some hot chick strip tease for you and then having you grandmother come in and finish the deed.
It had no build up. I think this lead BEGS for a build up. Also, I agree towards the end u add some uneeded effects. The piano is a good touch but could have been elaborated on. It good but it needs diversity.
Final word:
While the riff was good and the bass was thumping it could have been 10 folds better.
5/5
BTW what did u mean by
Just when Pilchard thought he was finished, PUT YOUR HAND IN THE AIR........... AGAIN ;)
(is this a remix?)