LOL I reveiwed the wrong song ignore the other view on ur classical piece
Yea this song needs some major work.
Your arp bass thing is way generic and..
The lead you got is chessy which I guess is what you were going for but itz also generic.
Also the songs kinda lacks a good build up the one you have lacks anything that really sets it apart other than that little note that rose and fell.
The Drums were far too buried and didn't really add anything to the song. They need improvement
With all those tweaks it might seem like It wasn't a good song but in reality it was above average.
Yeah, I saw, lol. Wish I could truely laugh, but I'm in a drowzy state because I took the wrong medicene. Of a little bit, I was wishing I wasn't alive, but now I have a good review. Thanks for cheering me up!
You reviewed the wrong song. Oh well, thanks anyways!
Your Level are way fucked up you need to do something about those. They are allmost as bad as mine LOL. Let me give u a tip I got from Fadeliss set a compressor to -6 and a 3:1 Ratio worked miracles for me.
Other than that the acutual song was kinda repitive and lacked drive. Try adjusting your drums and expanding on the ideas you have goin with your melody and Bass. The song seems Weak in almost all Traits. Good try with practice you can Progress so So don't trip.
Check out My Dre remix While your here
Obviously you haven't been to a college football game in your lifetime, so i'll accept that comment
Good Beat you got going here
This is good The Orch feels a little over the top though. Doesn't feel hip hop enough then again you said it was a sort of fusion. So thats not really a valid critique.
The intro Dragged but the that Snare Fill Right before the Drums kicked in was Awesome.
The snare sample you used contrasted the mix way to much and
Your bass drum sounds a little to much on the low end in some parts of the song.
Other than those small things an Excellent Mix
Check out My Dre R3mix itz allright
The snare overpoweres because of the compression, which I can understand it contrasted the mix. I tried lowering the volume because even I realized that it did. I should of lowered it a tad more.
The bass drum is originaly low. The EQ gave it the extra thump to make it more noticeable.
Thanks for the review.
Are U serious
If u were just jokin round I give u a 10 otherwise this is funny bad.
I'm the best rapper ever. Don't even fuck with this muh fukka.
Best Dnb Artist on Newgrounds
Another master piece . The Filter cuts were tasteful and caught me by surprise in a good way.
By the way the hat is way too loud
It sounds like a simple up and down pattern on the velocity right? well if it is you could lower it just a tad. Or maybe use a diffrent Hat
Your lead is great its random. Plus that Orch you got going during the interlude was nice.
My only major qualms are the Bass not punching through enough. I was feeling teh Bass then it just kinda faded into the background. Also the fade out was lame you could have had a single hit to finish it all off.
P.S. Do you have an Aim I got some stuff am wondering about submiting to newgrounds I think I Should run it through you first
Hmm..thanks for the comprehensive and very useful feedback.
Main problem with the track was probably with the bass, like you said it wasn't punching through enough as the track developed. BIG problem in drum 'n' bass!
Hey, thanks for your very high compliments, don't hear things that often :)
I would really love to give you any advice I could with your tracks, but I don't actually own AIM or any similar program. If I do get around to signing up for one I'll let you know, but for now, my advice is don't hesitate to put up your latest tracks. That's the best way to get feedback. A song doesn't have to be 100% polished before you put it up, believe me.
And if it bombs, like half of mine do, you can always make more! Remember that!
Good luck :P
Yea that bell arp thing was horrible it had too much treble and was kinda annoying. This has some damn good mixing though. You need a more memorable lead though :p
AHHhhh My head Exploded I can't take it
Glitch at it finest. How are none tracks above regular?
You need to quit Newgrounds and take your music where its appreciated. I haven't submitted anything worth over 5 cents here. The only good thing am submitting is a collab piece with Maestro. (and maybe the unmastered version of a walk through Consequence)
5/5 Hands down
lol, thanks so much!
You're right, maybe in Germany they would appreciate my twisted slant on Techno..I'm wasting away here, I tell you! :)
I'll be eagerly awaiting your collab with Maestro(Sorrow is it? I'm a big fan of his btw)
Keep cool Fraging_U.
Am feeling the effect on your intro lead but I think you could done something better than the Orch. Also your drums Could use some help.(maybe am just comparing your remix to mine) Nice kick though.
5/5 I like it
It wasn't bad but it wasn't ground breaking by any means. Your drums were a little too buried. try to bring them out more with a compressor. Check out My Tetris Remix to see what I mean.
Overall I likeed it just needed better mastering
I gave you a 5/5 ;)
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